Thursday, April 30, 2009

My animatic

I'm so happy with the way this turned out. I don't particularly want to cut parts out but if I have to I will :)

Drawing from Dana Ferris on Vimeo.


Frank said...

Hey Dana

I've got a critique for you fresh off the press... from my wife (Fran), she said, "That was beautiful! That was great."

Well done. Fran was particularly captured by the jump for the balloon.

I think that has to be your highest 'mountain peak' in terms of getting responses from the audience.

I see you've cut it down some more from 2 minutes? If that is correct, good work.

We can ask the music gurus to help with getting those cuts smoother in the audio... Or, here's an idea, you could consider moments of silence and fading in of the music to add 'texture' to your story, using the music to accentuate the story at the correct moments.

That might free up your time management and editing even more.

I'm really looking forward, excited actually, to help you work on this project. It is a lot of work but I think the rewards will be great, if you can do it.

You have to go to bed every night just aching to get up in the morning to animate.

Thanks for posting up your work.

Dana said...

I've already started thinking about the layouts and backgrounds! I want to get them out of the way before we really start working on the animation so that I won't have to think about them later.

And tell your wife that im really happy taht she enjoyed it!

I'm also excited that your excited frank, this is gonna be fun :B

Willem Wynand said...

=) awsome animatic =D i'm really looking forward to seeing the complete piece =) good job

Dana said...

Thanks Will. I'm looking forward to making it, it's gonna be fun on a bun!